1. 30-day scripts are hard.
2. I needed an extra pair of eyeballs.
Not that I didn't try. My expected reader wasn't available and there was a deadline to meet. But never again will I turn in a script that has a handful of grammatical errors. At least I went light on the parentheticals, but I could have cut them much more. Lesson learned. I apologize, Script-a-thon, but hey, 30 days. Give credit where credit is due!